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And she gets two bonus languages.

Ah, meant to type 5 there, good catch. I'll double check for anymore errors.

Actually I just spotted something, the skill ranks in you perception skill is 6 when the limit for now is 5. I would say to put that extra skill rank into the Fly skill if you plan on flying.

Well the character sheet looks okay now, I see no oblivious problems with it now.

What ring is that? I only thought you had a little over 1000 GP left and the nearest ring to that price is costed at 2,000 GP.

As for your sheet, it was done fast but I want to note a few things.

1. You can't make a weapon or Armor a magic weapon unless you make it a masterwork weapon. That would be 300 GP per weapon and 150 GP per armor. I would just go ahead and do that for the Adamantine gear so you won't have to waste them by throwing them away when you need to get magic weapons.
2. I would say look into getting a few magic items, but with point number 1 and that you just bought. Just keep in mind as you get more GP that magic items that boost your stats are what you should focus on getting.
3. ...Why do you have 10 ranks in heal? The max for any skill is your current level, or in this case five. Also, you should have 30 skill ranks, with an extra +1 each time you took your favored class bonus to give you an extra skill point.
4. Make sure you note how much Essence you have, and the limit for how much Essence you can put into any given veil at one time. At level 5, that's only one point of Essence.
5. As a hint, make sure you go over the rules for veilweaving. It's somewhat tricky to get a handle on until you get it.

One last thing that I knew I forgot, the backstory. There is a group that has been calling itself the 'Fae of the Void' that has been causing trouble that is rapidly growing. The group, seemingly composed all by elves with a light purple skin color, are a growing treat that does things from burning villages to charming lords and nobles to aid them all for some reason. Well you and a few other people had enough and after some work, you found where one of their bases is at in the region and set out to destroy it.

Your character's should have some kind of bad interaction with them in the past, or otherwise have some other reason why they would want to go and be proactive in destroying the group.

Elan is a race that takes the most standout examples of other races they can find and then converts them into a "perfected psionic humaniod" (and more important a redhead :X). They can spend power points to increase their durability and that sort of thing. Moonlight Meditant is a soulknife archetype based around turning your mindblade into a natural weapon and manifesting a shell of soulknife around you to be bigger, so kind of like a psionic werewolf/other transforming creature.

Alright, here's what you need to know to build your character.

The first is that your character's level will be 5. That also means the the GP you start with is 10,500 GP.

The second is that you can choose to get what ability scores your character has by 20 point buy, or if you're feeling lucky then you may roll 4d6, keep the highest three rolls, 6 times and assign those 6 grouped rolls to the attribute you wish.

The third is that you are only limited to classes/class archtypes that are from Dreamscarred Press, unless that class needs it for some reason such as a prestige class that needs arcane casting as it's prerequisite.

Other than that, although it isn't needed I would like to see your character once you made it and just give it a once over. Other than that, just remember the following as you build the character.

1.We're starting at level 5, so that means the character would get a permanent +1 boost to an ability score of the player's choice and 3 feats total from leveling up.
2. Keep in close touch with the other players as you make your character. Do your best to build to cover their weaknesses while growing their strengths.
3. Sunder is going to be in play some of the time, so note your Weapon's, Shield's, and/or Armor's HP and Hardness for ease of use.

That's incarnum stuff, right? I'm don't recognize Radiant. I was thinking along the lines of Moonlight Meditant from the fresh new Lords of the Wild book, not entirely sure of race yet but when Elan is legal I almost always take it so probably that? Double ability boost might be good tho, we'll see.