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January 11th, 12 11:28 PM
The_Silence
Well, despite the misconception, not only is the pilot short, but it's a bit over the top. All four girls just so happen to be wearing diapers and thinking the same thing? Seems a bit far-fetched...however, if you're planning on fleshing out the reasons and situations for each character, it could go somewhere.
Just be wary not to go down the same path a majority of these types of stories have. I won't give a detailed explanation of what that path is, as it is pretty much in every community out there.
You might be wondering why I'm so in-depth with this. I'm a writer. I've been writing for almost 10 years now. And I've been studying stories of this nature for quite some time. If you want to read some of my work, it's under "Dr_J" in the fiction section of this site. And I also invite you to read a few of the older stories posted on here as well if you haven't already. You'll see why I'm so critical of stories that lack in detail.
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Thanks alot for writing Pan's Predicament, any chance of us getting to read Part 4 later this month or sometime in March?