Shanatan2131 Shanatan2131 is offline

Hey how are you! Ive wrote more XD

I do follow you on deviant art. I just finally got around to making a page on there. I'm under Sasha-Buttersworth.

hey, great job on your story! It's nice to see you're still getting new stuff out

Shana-tan it's me movesetking!

Are you going to do any more on the new beginning story? It was a fantastic story c:

Hey, Shana. I just wanted to say that your stories are just awesome. Happy new year. And I hope you have good luck with figuring out an idea for your next story (I read about that on your deviantart page).

Thanks for the comment =)
So did i do better than the last story ?

Ehh.. its been forever since I wrote a fanfiction so I wrote one about one piece.
if you like you could read it.

i see that you have posted some new stories i am looking forward to reading them

For one example, you misuse apostrophes quite a bit. I didn't see too much of that in your newest SAO story, but it was certainly there. You often put an apostrophe in a word when you intend to just make it plural. That's the biggest thing that I always remember about your works. Other than that, you do indeed on occasion use words such as "there, their and they're" incorrectly. One such case, though not of the words I just mentioned, is in the story I recently commented on, where you used "then" instead of "than". I would have to look back over it to see the exact place where I saw that error, but I'm sure you get the point. I've got to go for a couple of hours, but I'll get back to you later with more common mistakes of yours. Before I go, though, I'd like to thank you for taking my words so graciously.