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First off apologies for the late response!
Second, I'm going to have to reject this bio but only for now.
Simply, you have not written nearly enough for this bio to be fleshed out, this is an advanced roleplay so the demand for a longer bio is far higher than others. What other details does your character have other than just simply "he had a loving family and damage to his bladder and bowels"? is there an important memory somewhere that can show us a bit more of his personaliy? How did he even get to La Lune in the first place?
You're free to read other bios as an example if you're struggling, but remember this place asks for a little more in both the roleplaying and bio area.
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