*Mmmphs*
Suggestions or comments... Well, the Rotom is being devious yet kind, but you could always have it pull a prank on her or something while it has here there, and of course that doesn't have to be her only conveyor trip, which I do intend to have her press her luck often in attempts to escape. You can choose to have those backfire as much as you want. ^_^
One solid suggestion in addition to the ambiguous one from before would be photos, like some sort of prop setup.

And if you want my comments, I have to say that I appreciate the responses as they are but I also feel like I am filling out all of the details and you're doing some really broad strokes. I'm always going to somehow have my character perceive things in a slow and detailed manner, but if you'd maybe add in a few of your own it'd reduce my workload and make it more interesting for readers.
Fair?