Oh, no worries. I wasn't sure if you were busy or if I might've messed up something on my end in a post.

Yeah! I'm really enjoying it all so far. I think Adora'll probably be compliant with Catra for the rest of the night after the mention of that other punishment earlier, though all the care she's getting from Catra in the shower might make for some fun moments of reflection for her whenever she's alone again too.

I'll be curious to see how it goes between Scorpia and Adora whenever they have their time together, and if what Catra and Adora got up to ever comes up.

What're your thoughts on it? Anything I could improve on/do differently?

I'm really sorry about that 3 day delay. I thought I'd replied, but it got lost in some other rp replies. Hope you're still enjoying the rp.

That sounds really cool! I can see it going a few different ways, and you're right, we'll see how it goes as they chat.

I was thinking that it would cut Catra off from going all the way with Adora then she storms out and gives an excuse but no specifics, and that leads Scorpia to get even more jealous to the point that she insists on staying behind to guard Adora when Catra leads the gang to raid. Thus leading to our first Adora/Scorpia moment, figure maybe it can start by Adora pointing out that neither of them want her there so maybe she tries to convince Scorpia to let her go or something, then we can see where it goes from there.

You could play a couple gang members confused that Scorpia gathers.

Is there anything you'd like me to do with whatever Scorpia's up to with the alarm? I'm curious to see where that bit goes

Gotcha, sounds good to me

It was fine, but it might make more sense for Adora to resist a little more so I think taking out the last paragraph was a good call and all you needed to do.

Let me know if that was too much all at once. I wasn't sure where the line would fall with Adora at this stage (edit, went ahead and removed the final paragraph of Adora admitting, in case you wanted Catra to do anything before she does)

Awesome! Yes, I've been good with how you've been playing Catra. I've really been enjoying your take on her actually, I think it's great. I'm curious to see where it ends up going really haha.

And sounds good, same if there's anything on my end you'd like me to tone down. I'm green light all the way with what you've been doing so far

Oh no I think it's been fine so far. Are you okay with how I've been playing Catra? I figure she's been wrestling with her urges to dominate Adora more directly since they caught her and seeing her like this has pushed her over the edge. Also if at any point you want me to tone down the bondage elements just say so.