Teesle come baaaaaaaack

Thanks for the critique. You're right about the breasts, I noticed that but I didn't think it was that big a deal.

Here's what I drew today:

I know the urine stream is not so great...I'm not very sure how to draw that correctly without making it too detailed.

I'm looking forward to reading your story too.

Her eyes look a little hollow, bad not "bad", just like she is very fuckin' tired, what could be plausible if she stalked around a whole night in these clammy pants.
Only thing that bugs me in this picture are the boobs on her chest and how her chest is turned, can't put my figner on it at the moment ( little sleepy here ), but it looks odd at the moment.

In good news I just have to proof read the chapter one last time, then I'm ready to post, give me around another tewnt fours x )

That's a good point, you're definitely right...

Here's another thing I drew, same character: http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/3249/sniperwolf.jpg I'm really not very happy with the eyes but I gave up after a few attempts. Let me know what you think.

Of course I'm interessted in the stuff you draw, silly you ; P
Like the the colours and her expression in that one, but her panties seem more like they're smeared with peanut butter than being actually dirtied by "fecal matter".

Secondly, yes you're right I was inspired to write by that particular story.

I'm not a fan of all the baby, pacifier, bib or whatever mostly AB related stuff myself in stories, but it fits so well with Samus whole "lost childhood" that I try to picture in my story and how the " bad guys" try to make her defenseless.

Hey, don't know if you're interested but I drew this lately: http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/1208/41011020.jpg That's Sniper Wolf from Metal Gear Solid. If you've got any ideas for pictures let me know.

I also enjoyed the WoW story. I can see you've taken some inspiration from it perhaps? Particularly the part where she's struggling with the urge to act like a baby, kind of reminds me of your stories. I personally don't relate as much to the AB stuff, though...unless it's Samus.

I just uploaded it, hope they don't take to much time with approving it. It's really one of my most favourite stories, the sheer perfect balance of torment, cute and sexy things that happens is breathtaking

Alright, I'll post there when you're done the next chapter I guess?

I think I do like the sound of your Warcraft idea as well. I'll be looking forward to seeing that when you decide to do it.

Also let me know when you post that WoW story, I'm curious to read it.

I would aprove of you as my "messenger", makes me seem so damn important : P
No really, I frequent the nyou boards not so much because it justs loads so damn,... really don't know why, so I need too much time to look through it. So it would be appreciated.

also I'm really happy that I could think of the right thing to please my biggest fan ; >

but about the sequel,... not that I'm alreadysick of Samus and the cute littlle miseries that could happen to her, I just wish to do a nice Warcraft fic with some stubborn and pseudo-strong warriorlady/girl.

There was once a really nice WoW Story on the net with about six chapters that has never been finished. i think I'll post it ehre tomorrow,you should read it, good stuff ;D

Just to bad that I don't know the author or if he still roams the internet or any of the boards related to this kind of stuff

Yesss that's just the kind of flashback I was hoping for. And I guess if your story ends then maybe I'll bug you for a sequel one day.

I'm sure the folks at Nyou Fiction would be excited to hear that your story is continuing, I think it was well received there. I'd be happy to make a post there unless you'd rather do it yourself...

And in a sense, I'm glad you've taken your time for this, as it's given me time to grow as an artist before making any new pictures.