Oooh gotcha, that sounds like a great reason to flee. I can see Catra being more on edge after that, maybe thinking that one of the other two might betray her at some point.

Were you thinking of a fade to black after they leave to go to someplace new, or do you think a few scenes of them on the run would be good to have?

I was thinking the escape would probably be Catra coming back alone from the raid revealing that it was all a trap and their entire gang either got captured or betrayed them. Then knowing that a counterattack is coming to take the ship they grab Adora and flee.

That could be cool! I could see them changing where they stay at over time if they need to too. I like the idea of the why Adora is still a prisoner! I'm sure Catra would need to keep some element of control over things if things went south for her with the gang in the Crimson Waste too.

I also like that potentially being how Scorpia ends up trying to make them more into a family system type thing. From her point of view, she'd probably seen or helped with Adora as a baby for a few days so it might come naturally. Plus they're both the only people she has to care for or would worry about, so it would make sense to me that a romantic attraction could start to form.

It might be early to figure out how the escape might go, but have you thought about how that might look? I imagine it could be something they opt to do during the dead of night or soon after Catra gets back with them. We could have one of the gang members try to steal Adora for some sort of reward or bounty they think might be out there before Catra or Scorpia intervenes and they realize the only thing left for them is to flee.

Yeah like they might go to one of the outlying ports, cities, or such. Catra would probably insist on keeping Adora as a "prisoner" partially to keep up the appearance about why she's treating her this way, but Scorpia starts to try and lighten it up. Letting her be untied more and stuff trying to work them more into a "family" system. This could also be the point where she and Adora start to interact somewhat romantically.

No it's fine, it makes sense for this to be a bit of a breaking point.

Oooh, now there's an interesting idea! I hadn't considered anything like that before. I agree it would be hard to baby her in the Crimson Waste, given it'd be hard to get any sort of baby type supplies without it being really suspicious/weird.

It would make sense that they'd eventually move on from the Crimson Waste, plus might make the bit of pretense of why Adora's still their prisoner be up for debate. Though maybe at that point it's more because they prefer Adora like that and want her around even if they won't admit it? Do you have any thoughts on where they might go instead, since they'll still need to avoid the Horde and the Princesses?

Also, I figured Adora would fight against the diaper a little bit more, but if you need me to change it so Catra can change her, let me know and I can edit my post.

Hey so I was thinking that it might be fun if Catra's gang loses the battle they go to and this causes her and Scorpia to flee with Adora somewhere else. Just because it feels like there's a limit to how much they can really baby her in the Crimson Wastes.

That makes sense, I think that's a nice touch. I can imagine there'll be a lot of that for a while.

Oh, for sure. I definitely agree about the protective/maternal part though, especially since Adora won't really have much to sort of fight back with other than denial or explaining it's not needed.

I think you're doing fine, like I'm playing Catra as now that she has Adora alone she's essentially lost control of all the feelings she's been suppressing and soon it's going to start conflicting with her.

I kind of see Scorpia when she sees Adora in a diaper she's going to reflexively find it adorable, but try, and mostly fail, to put her down for it. I kind of see her growing much more protective and maternal of Adora.

Oh, no worries. I wasn't sure if you were busy or if I might've messed up something on my end in a post.

Yeah! I'm really enjoying it all so far. I think Adora'll probably be compliant with Catra for the rest of the night after the mention of that other punishment earlier, though all the care she's getting from Catra in the shower might make for some fun moments of reflection for her whenever she's alone again too.

I'll be curious to see how it goes between Scorpia and Adora whenever they have their time together, and if what Catra and Adora got up to ever comes up.

What're your thoughts on it? Anything I could improve on/do differently?

I'm really sorry about that 3 day delay. I thought I'd replied, but it got lost in some other rp replies. Hope you're still enjoying the rp.