So I took a few liberties with Carlos to give Chelsea a reason to not go out the front door and try to find another escape route in panic, even if Carlos wasn’t actually chasing her down. I feel that sort of babyish worry adds to her decent into smaller thoughts and helps you with the setup.
This will also make it make more sense later when Chelsea is caught up in more silly shenanigans on different scenarios and acts babyish or bratty instead of worried or fearful - She’s slowly becoming more like the baby she’s being treated as, but she’ll always retain her sense of self and want to escape. I’ll continue playing the game all the same, but do let me know if you have questions comments or concerns.
Speaking of which, and I’m not trying to pick on you, but the beginning of your most recent post that I’ve responded to was a little hard to understand with the way it was written.
I worked it out but outside readers may not, so perhaps a small edit is in order for clarity. ^_^’ That being said I love your writing! Happy Thanksgiving even though yu don’t celebrate it.
