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ok , First up , WWWWAAAYYYYY to short
Second, don't take a new line every time.
Third, more detail , loads more detail and description.
Forth , it's almost all dialogue , you need something happening .
Fifth , the plot seems a little basic , you need something interesting to happen to drag people in.
now ive got a subscription to Microsoft word i can take all the time i need where as before i was running on the free month download lol
anyways any criticism is welcome no matter how bad or harsh it is
Well I'm only going to be looking at plot , the rest of it is up to you. Net time , take your time , I take months on mine and I rush them a little even when I have all the time in the world.
