Hey there arby, I read the three chapters you tried to post. I like the story, but I can't approve it due to an error; each of the stories came out as one big paragraph. This link should help you fix it if you had put paragraphs in it. Get that fixed up, and I can approve them; looking forward to seeing what happens next ^_^
https://diaperedanime.com/forum/showt...iction+section