Thank you for the review on my KH story. Here's chapter 1:
https://diaperedanime.com/forum/vbart...eid=843&title=
As to the question of where's Roxas, the story starts during the time he is comatose during the beginning of the game, while Sora is still in Castle Oblivion and Namine is messing with their memories. Roxas will come into the story at a later time, promise ^_^