Okay, i looked over what you had, and found several problems. One, length; you need several paragraphs, maybe five or so, to have a good amount to a chapter. No one's gonna approve a small post.
Two, everything you have appears as one giant block of text, no paragraphs or spaces. This thread should help;
https://diaperedanime.com/forum/showt...iction+section
Three, description. No one has any idea of what the characters look like. Not good for the readers. Is this original, or from an already existing series?
Four, the biggest in my opinion, at the end of the chapter you had a request for a picture. On this site you're not allowed to ask for requests unless an artist has stated they are taking requests. You can ask one about a possible commission, a paid for picture, but not requests.
That's why your stories aren't being approved.