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Yeah... good point. And how would that lead to him meeting the girl, exactly?

I totally agree. I was thinking of him meeting her as a baby. XD

That actually seems better; he's loving and supportive with this person in his life, and she does what she does to keep the bonding with him.

Just trying to give him more of a definable aesthetic trait. He doesn't necessarily have to have a beard. >w<

I am accepting of her growing to like the treatment, but the allergy seems kind of... eh, I dunno. If she were to become full-blown incontinent, I'd expect it'd be a gradual process that weakens her body or an accident or event that causes the change almost immediately, like a car crash or another similar thing like that.

Also, would she be 18 at the very start when he first sees her?

Hm... well, definitely tall. Not freakishly tall, but big enough to seem like a caring, protective father figure and a generally big guy. So somewhere around 6 feet. He's not necessarily athletic, but has a high metabolism that keeps him at an average weight despite probably being a guy that eats a lot of junk food. He dons a black, scraggly beard (which Tali will come to love nuzzling against) with matching hair. Mid 20s or even early 30s, works as a store manager, lives alone at an apartment and walks to work every day. Has enough to pay rent for the cheap apartment he lives in and even has enough excess to indulge in his PC gaming and fast food habits. He has green eyes. Also, his hair and beard might look something like this, though it'd be black hair.
http://media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/73...84048572d0.jpg

Some of those ideas sound okay?

Yep. =D

I was actually thinking that immediately. XD

The first one, yeah. But that's about it. And I haven't even really beaten it. >_>'

Hardy-har-har. =P

Well, maybe like a video game girl he admires dearly since he has little to no people in his life.

Hm... tough one. Maybe she doesn't originally have a name or have much recollection of her past, so the "father" names her something after one of his interests at the time or something like that. Dunno, really. *shrugs*

Yeah, makes it seem mean-spirited calling her a monster. Maybe replace it with "alien"?