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Glad it's going well for you, have fun with it.
I'm fine thank you. Except I brought a bright red sweater which I thought was rather nice yesterday and came down stairs wearing it this morning. My little sister thought I was the most hilarious thing ever. She laughed for a full 15 mins and I'm not exagerating. I guessing she was just supprised by it. I can't recall the last time I wore red. I can't say she did wonders for my self esteam though.
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1 sounds more interesting, although you'll have to come up with a reason why Lily's mother lives when Lily thought she was dead. (maybe she was shot with a tranquilizer dart, and Lily, not knowing about human weapons thought it was lethal?)
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that's sounds like an interesting idea.
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Well like I've been saying, get into your characters head. If you feel lily's natural response is to start likeing Lisa then just go ahead and start writing it.
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Aye, if Lily starts to feel comfortable around Lisa and then Lisa gets complacent (plus the fact they are likely to be more intimate) then it gives realistic oppertunity for something like to go wrong.
Plus dramatically speaking, the best stories are the ones were thing just start to work out and then suddenly everything goes wrong agaon. So yeah it's good dramaically.
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Good morning. I was about to try an go back to bed.
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that's actually a pretty good idea.
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kk that's kwl. I'll write my post.
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Okay, well thank you. Do you want any help with it?