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Thank you. There are ways to edit your post so it's got more to it. For example you never explained why Lily feels she needs to talk, surely that would be a question that she going through her head the previous night or even if it just the idea just hit her suddenly as she saw Lisa, then say that, describe how she feels.
There are always ways to make your character more real and your story more interesting. You don't need to play a vampire lol you just need to think about and try to step into your characters shoes.
Of course I realise it's getting late and your probably tired so don't feel you HAVE to edit your post. But it's some advice to consider for next time maybe.
Heya. Sorry my post took so long but it was kind of a important one. I hope you enjoy it. Though please excuse all the romantic countryside descripbtions lol.
hey are you enjoying the rp so far? I figure this setup gives up plenty of plot ideas, from your character trying to get mine to see her as an equal and a person, to her conflict with the society, and my own characters quest to train/civilize Lily (thus giving her some opportunities to be dominant.) Is it working for you?
Hi k13diaper, I just wanted to let you know I can't really type at the moment because I just (stupidly) cut my finger and it's akward/painful. I'll be back later if it feels better. If not then I'll see you tommorrow. Have a nice day.
P.S. Nice posts in the vampire RP.
lol ah okay, I'm just trying to be the responsible adult thats all. In that case feel free to stick around till i'm done.
I'm gonna stop chatting now. I want to concentrate. See you later.
Actually what I was planned was that lisa doesn't manage to bite her fully because she pulls away, revulsed by her actions.
Your idea is interesting but I think its kind of difficult to explain and would detract from the moment because that.
But anyway, I think you ought to get to bed now. I'll have my post done for the morning and you can read it then or when you get back from school and have more time spend on your own post.
Hi. i'm just gonna reply to the Vampire RP now if you don't mind waiting.
I know my posts are taking a long time, but i'm really into this one, I hope you don't mind that i'm writing such long posts, I'm just indulgeing my imagination.