Seems like you got the character description well done in the bit you've presented, just gotta watch the grammer.

"his face was acred in a smerk as he looked the land side over"

I think you meant "arched", as "acred" refers to land owned, and did you mean "smirk" when you stated "smerk"

"a katana rested by her waste and a large hand gun on his belt."

Shouldn't "her" be "his", and "waste" be "waist"?

"behind him where two graves for the friends her had lost."

The friends "he" had lost?

That's all I got. Just gotta watch your grammer girl. Otherwise it has potential, in my humble opinion.

thanks! i was typeing it with my ps3. and my controller sticks. it not an excuse but it dos have someting to do with why i made a few dum mistakes

looks interesting. keep it up...character development is cool