Help me out of my one line stage
 

Hi, i noticed nubres of complains about my one lyne writing style. this makes me sad because people dont rp with me anymore, so i decided to change that. i want to start roleplaying with at least three lines of text per post. rught now i need someone to show me what kind of things you can add to basic posts to make them longer.

My idea is to do an rp with someone in wich that person can tell me if ite was a bunch of nonsense i put in my post or if i'm going the right way.

Hopefully this can get me to roleplay more with new people.

Thanks

An orphan girl in the pokemon world, her only companions are her eevee evolutions, she has each one, from Flareon, to Espeon, but she is too scared to trust other people until a man or woman takes her off the streets.

(Flareon, Vaporeon, Jolteon, Leafeon, Umbreon, Espeon, Glaceon, and Sylveon)

It would be best if you read some rps that aren't one liners to see the descriptions they used and how they operate.

yes, that would be best i think.

tempest i'm sorry but i'm doing like five roleplays with you :P

If you're willing to read through some MLP stuff, you could view a few of mine. THough if you're more comfortable with Pokemon, I've got one of my own with a ton of detail that might help.