fictional nursery ((remade after unwanted posts.))

[hellshero]

ok so this is a interdmimensional nursery. it`s got a house and a door in any dimension. it`s run by a woman named kelly. who stole a mans heart away from an evil woman. she eventually became pregnant but this only made the woman even angrier so she cursed her to never be able to have her child, pregnant forever, basically cryo freezing the baby in her womb. her husband, an interdimensional hero set up the house to be like this as a business for her while he went away to fight the evil woman...he never came back.

ok thats the worst background i`ve ever made but it will have to do. so bring any kind of character from any show,game, movie, whatever even your own creation. kelly will also hire people.oh and just as a new heads up powers are nullified in the house so that it helps keep the stress put on kelly down since she won`t have to worry about any powers unless your a coworkethen you get a special wrist band which only limits your powers.r

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kelly walked past her front door window. it was a huge mansion that had technically many windows but this one was the only one that looked straight down the driveway, after that everything was a grassy field thought the door led to all sorts of houses. she rubbed her big baby belly. she still coulkdn`t believe the woman did this to her unborn child. she had asked...why stop the baby from being born, why not just kill it? the woman had replied that since she couldn`t be with the man she loved, she couldn`t be with her child EVER. she would have to live with what could have been just like the woman did with her husband, wondering what could of happened had she been " a good girl" and married him.

also she took in a girl named lilly who has special technology in her head which allows an AI to rule over her mind and body.

[Bandit Keith]

gohan; ok lets see is there some thing I can do today besides help out here like some trianing or a good fight but I dont need that right now lets see if my love is up get

pan; oo gohan hows it going I need my diaper changed if you dont mind changing me do you

gohan; no I dcnt love

[hellshero]

((what...dude first off remember " "for speech. second you need to put more action, fill it out. like this remember model the post like mine and you`ll be better in no time))

kelly watched the window quietly before walking away towards a rocking chair. as she did lilly ran up and held her arms up to show she wanted to be picked up. kelly smiled and picked her up before sitting down in the rocking chair. " what up baby are you hungry? your a bit early on your nap."said kelly as she saw lilly yawn. lilly shook her head and snuggled into kelly`s arms, using her breast as a pillow while she closed her eyes. " i had a nightmare. i still wanna sleep mommy."said lilly as she yawned again and slowly fell asleep in kelly arms, slowly putting her thumb in her mouth and began sucking on it.

[Bandit Keith]

(ok then )

gohan got up walked over to pan and went super saiyen then started to rap his arms one at a time around pan then he piked her started to walk down the staers to pan room wicth had all the thing you wood want for a baby and then gohan put her on the changing table he then started guickly and pusly put a nuther on her then he took the old diaper out side and yell masenko then there was no more diaper

(hows that hellshero as I sead I suck wenn first staring a thread so that why I try to stay from makeing alot of these like this till I git more in to the thread so sorry this part sucks)

[mattstig]

(if i may comment, pan is one of the most stubborn characters and wouldn't go on with anyone changing her, secondly, if gohan's going to get rid of a diaper he'd throw it away due to his education, but if he did use masenok, which would be a wait of engery when he could just use a ki blast, he'd have to put his fingers interlocked with palms forward to use that attack. plus your diaper change on pan was just like "ok ok ok.........what?" u basically didn't explain the changing.

then hellshero, just watch the transitions of sentences in the dialouge u use)

[hellshero]

((dude why don`t you join us?))

[Bandit Keith]

Originally Posted by mattstig

(if i may comment, pan is one of the most stubborn characters and wouldn't go on with anyone changing her, secondly, if gohan's going to get rid of a diaper he'd throw it away due to his education, but if he did use masenok, which would be a wait of engery when he could just use a ki blast, he'd have to put his fingers interlocked with palms forward to use that attack. plus your diaper change on pan was just like "ok ok ok.........what?" u basically didn't explain the changing.

then hellshero, just watch the transitions of sentences in the dialouge u use)

you mattsig this gohon is the one that is from the paral time line that teen trunks came from so there and this is a rping so there

[hellshero]

((but mattsig has a point you should stick the the basic character idea. either way he`s educated and should act so.))

[Bandit Keith]

ok befor this gits out of hand first he is and get not becouce he had to stop his schooling to fight the andriods so he cound keep whas left of the human race alive and yes he coud have just throun it away but what the hay its just that I that have him do it ok