Tim Lokison

[Chibi Tom]

Name: Tim Lokison

Age: 11

Gender: male

Height: 4ft'7in

Weight: 85 pounds

Race: half human half elf

Pain Tolerance: normal for a human

Abilities: has some ability with telekinesis. Can easily lift small things, like men's or pencils but requires a lot of concentration for heavier things like a text book

Interests/Hobbies: Loves writing different stories poetry

Personality: Quiet but friendly. He's a bit of a smart aleck, but he's a good kid.

Appearance: slightly pointed ears, with messy black hair. He has dark brown eyes and fair skin. He usually wears baggy sweats, with a pull up underneath, for the colder seasons along with his favorite green sweat shirt, and during the warmer months, he wears basketball shorts and a green tshirt.

History: He comes from a loving family, but due to a freak accident, his bladder and bowels were damaged and now has trouble holding it in for a long time. He used to be teased because he kept having accidents, so he began to wear pull ups to hide them.



School Clubs/Activities: He's involved in the soft music club and drama club

[Zinnia Hime]

First off apologies for the late response!

Second, I'm going to have to reject this bio but only for now.

Simply, you have not written nearly enough for this bio to be fleshed out, this is an advanced roleplay so the demand for a longer bio is far higher than others. What other details does your character have other than just simply "he had a loving family and damage to his bladder and bowels"? is there an important memory somewhere that can show us a bit more of his personaliy? How did he even get to La Lune in the first place?

You're free to read other bios as an example if you're struggling, but remember this place asks for a little more in both the roleplaying and bio area.

[Chibi Tom]

Okay, thank you for letting me know. Don't worry about the late response, we all have stuff to do!