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Tips, Help, Collective Knowledge So You Can Write!
Old July 30th, 09, 02:28 AM   #1
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Tips, Help, Collective Knowledge So You Can Write!

Yes, that's what this thread is all about. I'd like to share with you some tips that have helped me improve my writing skills. I'm also inviting any and all of you who have advice and tips on writing to please post them here.

Keep in mind before I begin: Please DO NOT go off topic on this thread. It's vital we stay on topic here. This is solely meant to help those who have writer's block, are stuck on how to go about writing a story, or those with other possible issues.

I'm also open to those of you who have questions to ask them here. I can answer them to the best of my ability.

With that said, here is a little blurb on some things you can take with you the next time you want to start a story:

Brainstorm

They've been teaching this in school since as far as I can remember, and the same principle can be applied to writing. There are multiple ways to go about doing this, but one way that I've found to work is to take a piece of paper and a pen, and make a few circles at different ends of the paper. One circle is for characters, one for plot, one for setting (time, place, etc.), and one for theme (assuming there are four circles...you can make as many or as little as you want).

Then, branch out ideas from each circle. So, under the plot, write some ideas that you think will work. Under characters, write out some character names and backgrounds, etc. Keep doing this until you've run out of ideas, then look back and see what you think works and what you think won't work. Heck, you might even find yourself being able to merge ideas!

Character Development

Okay, this is a big one. In my opinion, one of the most key elements in a story is the character. However, an even higher goal I like to set is to make the reader become attached to the character(s). A lot of times, a character can make or break a story, mainly because the reader will ask, "why should I care?" They need somebody they can relate to. What can be done to achieve this? Details!

What kind of accent does your character have? What kind of clothing does he/she wear? What's their background story? Things like this will help build your character.

For instance, I'm currently working on a piece where the main character talks and acts as though he were a knight...even though he's living in the present. Why, do you ask? Because he modeled himself after his favorite character from a book, and experiencing a traumatic event, he actually absorbed himself in the knight. I'm talking the whole shebang here. He talks and acts as though he lived in the days of kings.

Avoiding the Cliches

This is another biggie. I searched far and wide for years and years through the sea of ABDL-related forums and websites to find which stories have been posted, which have worked, and which have not worked. That's how I came up with the idea for "I, Infantilist". I wanted to make it believable and real, while still adding that touch of fiction.

Scope them out if you haven't done so already. Even if you're writing a fan fiction, the chance of you falling into the cliche trap is still applicable. You know, the whole "(insert character here) loved to wear diapers/wears diapers in secret/had an accident. Their parents/significant other/friend who doesn't mind partaking in putting said character into diapers/siblings find out, and begin treating them like a baby. Humiliation and udder embarrassment ensues."

Be wary, writers! This can create some negative vibes! Your story should stick above the rest. The whole "be different" speech you've probably heard a million times? Listen to it. It does pay off and does give you the upper hand when writing.

Spelling/Grammar

Yes, yes. I know. I'm a spelling/grammar Nazi. And I know people will always defend the whole "nobody's perfect" issue. However, if you can pretend for a minute that a piece of writing is being spoken aloud, then this issue begins to make more sense.

I see writing as the silent form of public speaking, if that makes sense. It's being "read" to your brain. Now imagine the misspellings and errors are spoken aloud. Sounds silly, doesn't it? Not to mention it takes away the credibility of the "speaker." The same goes for writing. If you don't make an effort to spell correctly and use proper grammar, your credibility can go down (not to say that it always will).

I know there have been issues with dyslexia/reading/writing, but honestly, this is easily one of the most important parts of writing. Even if a story is considered bad, I can give credit to the writer if they've made it error-free (or mostly error free...nobody's perfect). What you may not understand is that there are people (like myself) who read a lot. Now, when I read a story that is full of errors, each error completely sidetracks my train of thought. I lose my focus on what I was reading, become upset, and generally stop reading the story.

Microsoft Word has a spell checker. Open Office has a spell checker. Notepad does NOT have a spell checker. If you think you might need something spell checked, ask someone on here to read it. Granted, they may not always be willing to help you, but there are some.

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For now, that's all I will share...I want to see how this thread does before I continue Any questions/feedback, please post them here.

Also, please do NOT post if you're going to disagree/pick apart the tips, or go off topic. These are things that have helped me, but I know there are many, many other tips and techniques that are used by other writers. If you've got some tips to share, however, please DO post them here as well (and pleaaaaaase follow the spelling/grammar tip when doing this) Remember, collective knowledge/intelligence! It's what makes things better!
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Old July 30th, 09, 02:40 AM   #2
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Try using the least amount words to prove a point because filler is killer.
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Old July 30th, 09, 02:51 PM   #3
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Ok, I also have some tips for you guys! I know I'm not a perfect writer but Mistress told me this long ago, its for writers block, along with some tools, books etc that I use.

Writers Block:

This will sound strange to alot of you but it worked for me almost everytime i have had the dreaded Writers Block. Anyway, the simply trick, if you are using a computer, is to randomly type short paragraphs or just anything. I know most of you will dissagree but I have found this very useful because it forces me to think of random things to write, thus helping my story along. I hope that one helped XD

Computer Software:
TTS- Text to Speech is a great peice of software for any writer, yes i know the stupid MS Voices e.g. "MS Mary and MS Sam" are the worst voices around but with TextAloud, the software I use, you can purchase, or by other means, Sapi 5 voices. These voices sound much like someone reading your story aloud, hence the name Text Aloud. I have found this software VERY essential for my story and it has picked up 95-98% of my grammar and spelling issues. This software will also highlight the words as it reads them.

Dragon Natural Speaking:
Another good peice of software, in my opinion not as good as TA, but still very useful for anyone who needs it. This software comes built in with a SAPI 5 voice, which can read your work easily. It's functions are much like TA.

Microsoft Word:
Everyone has this but i have included it because of it's most obvious function. The spelling and grammar tool! most of you know how it picks these issues up for those who do not, a red underline indicates= spelling and a green indicates= grammar, i think.

BOOKS:

I have also found some books that may be useful but sadly, I am unable to find them at the moment ^^;; However! reading any kind of book can also aid any writer.

P.S. if I am able, I will post links to where you may be able to get Text Aloud, Microsoft Word and Dragon Natural Speaking

P.S.S. To clarify what SAPI are:

Sapi 4: Are free like MS SAM etc which are computer generated and suck

Sapi5: are desgined to speak more human and will need to be purchased or other ways.
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Old July 31st, 09, 02:28 AM   #4
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One thing I do that readers seem to like about my work is that I describe each scene in detail. By that I mean if a character gets up out of bed I say '*character* sat up, swung *his/her* legs off the side of the bed, and stood up.'

When I read, I like to picture the events of the story I'm reading in my head. I imagine it like I'm watching a movie. That's why I only summarize small actions a character does, like running across a field. By adding that extra bit of detail about what's happening to a character or the enviornment around them, it brings your story that much more to life.
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Old April 15th, 13, 11:48 AM   #5
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This is a really good topic!
There is another thing that seems to be in a lot of diaper stories: A character suddently can't control his/her bladder... For no reasons, or for reasons that are never really explained... It can be frustrating to see that people do not even search for a good reason to have diaper in their stories sometimes ^^"
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