Help or advice
Hi J-Pac here to ask some help or advice. Recently i tried out the fiction section to try & write some stories but haven't been approved so far this is what i got.
Hazuki is a 14 year old Vampire girl who lives her live or brother Kouhei & her grandfather. But what they didn't know was that she was having alot of bedtime accidents & knew it wasn't healthy for a teen vampire to have such accidents & this has been going on for the past 4 weeks Hazuki then took her wet sheets & proceeded to take them to the wash. Hazukis shikigami Haiji came in the laundry room & saw Hazuki washing her clothes master you cna't keep this up forever you'll have to tell slave boy about your wetting problem referring to Kouhei. Hazuki nodded i know but i'm worried how big brother gonna react to my bedwettting problem i'll tell him when the time is right she said pushing the start button on the washing machine, listen Haiji i'm gonna go take a shower to get thiurine smell off me don't tell Kouhei or Grandpa about my bedwetting. Haiji ears flattened yes master i'll keep quiet about it. Hazuki nodded good as she went back in her room to grab some fresh clothes then headed to bathroom then stripped her wet PJ bottoms off as well as her wet panties then took her pj top off then turned water faucet for the shower & slowly stepped inside the tub. Kouhei woke up to the sound of the washing machine & shower going off & rubbed her head huh whos doing laundry now i washed everything else yesterday he said as he climbed outta bed & went downstairs to check to see who laundery it was?.............................................. .............................................
Before i make it longer or continue to try to repost is there a way i can make it better to be approved?
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RIP JDF thank you for the memories you’ll always be my hero T_T 
