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Seems like you got the character description well done in the bit you've presented, just gotta watch the grammer.
"his face was acred in a smerk as he looked the land side over"
I think you meant "arched", as "acred" refers to land owned, and did you mean "smirk" when you stated "smerk"
"a katana rested by her waste and a large hand gun on his belt."
Shouldn't "her" be "his", and "waste" be "waist"?
"behind him where two graves for the friends her had lost."
The friends "he" had lost?
That's all I got. Just gotta watch your grammer girl. Otherwise it has potential, in my humble opinion.
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