I thought about it a bit and decided it may be a better idea to seperate this into a different discussion from my undertale discussion as to not to upset people who are interested in undertale but not this fan fiction. So we can talk about the entire thing here. Maybe nobody but me wants to talk about it but hey, they have been empty threads here before so it's ok if you don't want to. Seriously I don't want to be forceful or anything, if no one is interested I am ok with that and don't want to look annoying to anyone...
So finally this thread will have spoilers of this fan story, and I am making this my final warning, here are the links to the first part and the collection.
Now here's a link to the first part:
http://m.imgur.com/a/3ZcxV
http://ut-storyshift.tumblr.com/tagged/loop-one/chrono
Now feel free to chat about it here, I'll make my own post about it later today.